abandoned in the hour
abandoned in the crowd
abandoned in the chaos
abandoned in the moment
lying forgotten tossed aside without a hope
ravaged by time and inconsiderate misuse
torn apart by unwelcome souls of fate
the rising comes with no realization
up through the pain and out of the ashes
reborn and renewed, lifted up like never before
seen with eyes of love held in gentle hands
a beating heart within the embrace
chosen and wanted never abandoned
Maleko ©2012
(The above was written from the image  prompt ‘ABANDONED’ for Free Write Friday using what is called stream of consciousness writing, no editing, no proofing just writing! Please check out Kellie Elmore’s blog  for more information on Free Write Friday’s, comment with you link on Kellie’s blog, post on twitter hashtag #FWF and join the fun! )

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12 Comments

  1. “up through the pain and out of the ashes

    reborn and renewed, lifted up like never before”

    wow. what a great piece to return to! I have so missed reading everyones work and you are no exception. So pleased to be back. Thank you for making me feel something and remember to believe in hope tonight. ♥

    1. Thank you Kellie, this one was really quick and easy to write. Sometimes they simply flow that is why this format and forum is such fun and inspiring. Glad you are back as well!

  2. Absolutely great for imprompu writing! Mine was one out of the past but fit the prompt. Quick, spontaneous, off-the-cuff writing, however, sometimes produces the best work!

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